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PostSubject: Davis Silva, Citizen   Fri Apr 24, 2009 1:29 pm

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Name: Davis Silva

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Personality: Due to his exposure to death early in his life, he tends to take a backseat with most things, and the death of those around him phases him little to none. He enjoys tampering with chemicals in order to create new substances, and is a packrat. He collects most new things he comes across, although he rejects new people he comes across. Among close friends he’s just an average joe with a little bit a darker take on things than most.

Appearance: Davis has his hair cut short so it doesn’t get in the way of his sunglasses and eyes, though he allows to grow out in the back and sides. He is usually seen chewing a needle, and he has a cloth band around his neck with his family crest on it, along with another band strung around lower like a necklace with the kanji for fire on it. He wears a large heavy satchel that crosses his shouler and ties around the back. Both sides are littered with pockets, which are often full of metals, herbs, poisons, or medicines. He has a sword pocket built into the right arm of his shirt, though it is still tied down with bands to ensure it stays put even when Davis moves. Davis wears gloves with an alchemy circle on them, and metal studs on his knuckles. At his waist are two long strings of pocket filled belts, leading down to his jeans and boots.

Faction/Rank: Citizen

Nationality Amesterian


Battle/Skill Information

Weapons: A 3ft. Long sword contained in a pocket on his arm. The blade is made of iron and has no notable features beyond a decorative handle.

Skills: His father was a famous alchemist who used alchemy to aid people, however, the stress of his lack of money to provide for his family eventually broke him down until he grew insane. He desired his son to be powerful enough to have a better life than himself, so he tattooed an alchemy circle onto his tongue.

Davis is able to use basic alchemy by putting things in his mouth or licking them. He is knowledgeable with most forms of medicine, and often uses his alchemy to alter metals or other substances to aid others with medical treatment. His combat alchemy is below average, however, knowing only one of two uses for it.

Davis typically forms metal needles from metal’s he puts in his mouth, stored in the many pockets on his body. He can spit these at targets with a practiced and accurate aim. In addition, he can change the studs on his knuckles into sharp points, and use them to punch or slash.

Items: Items: Two finger less, metal knuckle, gloves that have an alchemy circle on them. A large pocket-filled satchel, two pocket-filled belts, and a sword (mentioned above.) All of Davis’s teeth are metal as well, losing his teeth with accidental alchemy using his tongue.



History & RP Sample

History:

Born into a locally famous family of doctors, who used alchemy to aid others, he was raised in the use of alchemy. He was taught the elements and compounds of herbs and metals, which he had a knack for. His father, however, had often given free medical care, and drove the family to bankruptcy.

His father, in an insane rage, tattooed an alchemy circle onto Davis’s tongue at age 8. Shortly afterwards, the military shot him dead after hearing reports of illegal alchemy. His father was attempting to make gold to make up for the family’s financial troubles.

With his new alchemy circle on his tongue, he tried to transmute things by inserting them into his mouth. His first few attempts however, failed to produce anything useful, until he accidentally destroyed his own teeth in an attempt. His mother helped him create artificial metal teeth, and shortly afterwards Davis began to be able to properly use the circle as desired.

Without her husband, however, Davis’s mother was unable to take care of the patients, many began to die under her care, even with her son’s help. She eventually contracted a disease that claimed her life, leaving Davis alone at 16. He was able to keep a steady income to live off of, but people began to leave his care for the care of Eastern Alchemists whose alchemy was better designed for beneficial care. Davis began to learn the destructive uses for alchemy to join the military, as he needed the money to survive.

RP Sample: From Naruto Revolution-

Davis watched as the sun set, streaking across the sky as it seemed to blow away the clouds with its radiant red light. Davis chewed a needle in his mouth, putting his arms into his pants pockets and sighing. The city shone bright, but the buildings's light lied about their current condition, Davis was well aware that those inside the buildings were no better off than himself. He struggled to get the money he needed, and now he'd just completely given up on this.

The State Alchemists killed his father, but it was a just death, that's what he had to tell himself, otherwise his conscious would not allow him to leave this place for military duty. It was his fault, his fault for trying to save his family when no other option existed. Davis snapped the needle in two and circled the broken metal in his mouth before reassembling it with his tongue's alchemical symbol. They were worthless, but he supposed they had as much of a need to join as himself.

Blood was trickling down the sky, or so it seemed, reminding him of his own blood that he would be turning over to the government, the worthless creatures that ran it. Whatever it took to survive though, whatever it took to survive, no matter how much of his dignity had to die in order to keep this hunk of organic flesh alive, he'd do it. He spent his life keeping everyone else alive, he could at least do the same for himself. He'd even helped a patient survive an automail implant, something beyond any other kind of pain, and now he would have to endure his own pain, something beyond any other pain he'd every felt or known, and emerge from the other side of it with the same strength as his automail patient.

He walked out of the house with a determined look, his eyes burning with power and passion as he looked out at a new world. But oh how he grimaced when he saw the old world the days, weeks, months, years ago when he heard his only option was automail. He was no blacksmith, but he knew that when he came to him,those hunks of metal were nothing above the cheapest available. Yet he wore them like they were shining armor, he came out without a penny left, just his life, and he smiled. He wasn't like that man, he needed more than his life to get by.

Davis pulled his hand out of his pocket as he strolled down the street, it would take the rest of the day to arrive at the palace, he'd have to grow a harder heart on the way before they tore it out of him.


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PostSubject: Re: Davis Silva, Citizen   Fri Apr 24, 2009 3:54 pm

A nationality would be like Ishbalan, Amsetrian etc etc etc.
So fix that, other than that problem there is only 1 other thing.
Please provide a Role Play sample of the way you would role play using your character. The purpose of having one isn't just to test how long you post, but sometimes shows a characters way of acting that a written personality can't.

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PostSubject: Re: Davis Silva, Citizen   Fri Apr 24, 2009 4:12 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Davis Silva, Citizen   Fri Apr 24, 2009 4:13 pm

Looks fine to me. Approved.

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