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PostSubject: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Apr 24, 2009 5:27 am

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Name:Gale Erra

Age:19

Gender:Male

Personality:gale is the type of person that is quiet and hate to be in stuff that have nothing to do with him,and he love to cook,when he is fighting he becomes very happy.He is not the type of person to kill his opponent he is the type to fight them then to be friends with them and ask for another fight.He always run from the fan girls,he like girls that dont think about him,but he is interested in love.

He can be a inspiring person if you get to know him.He love's to read books and he love's traveling often because of the fact that he get to explore the world and its good parts and bad parts and find mysterys of the world that people don't know.He is not the kind of person to watch as a lady drops her bag.He probly would but then again he probly won't because he is neaither good or bad he is in between.

Appearance:6'2 in height,134b,He normaly wears jet black stealth pants.With a under shirt that was black,and a jet black jacket.He have mediem size hair and natural red eyes.


Faction/Rank:civilian(alchemist)

Nationality:Unknown.


Battle/Skill Information

Weapons:what ever is in his distance

Skills:He mostly makes lightning and using things around him to change it.

Items:Gale has a Tatoo of the transmutation ciricle on his hands.6 hand guns.6 small throwing knife's.



History & RP Sample

History:
teenhood arc-
As a Teenager he had to learn hand-To-hand combat,Because he had to go into a place that were filled with crimmals.Gale fought threw his life.Untill he fought a man that over whelm him with A power that were something that Gale never new about.He heared it once and though it wasnt anything he couldnt handle.But he was wrong.Then he escaped then Learned more by buying books about them.His Parents didnt like it even tho they were one of the best in the world.He started to think of ways he could do alchemist circles.He then found out that it was against the law to us it.So Gale desided to join.So Gale went to a room and tatooed his hands.But it wasnt a normal Tatoo.it was the transmutation circle.


RP Sample:Gale starts to walk in the woods then he hears something in the bushies.He gets ready someone runs behind him and Gale sidestep and then kicks him in his side knocking him into a tree."who was that"A man came out of no where and pointed a gun to the head of Gale Erra.Gale turned around and then the man spoke"put your hands up your coming with me."Gale put his hands up and then Gale took his right leg and swong it around knocking the gun out of the guys hand and then the man's eye's wided as Gale raise up his right foot again and then kicks the man in the gut,Then he he quickly kicks his face up after the man bends over and holds his stomach.Then Gale give him a cuple of barrges of fist and then he flee with there clothes on.


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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Apr 24, 2009 3:48 pm

Judging from this application, I seriously recommend that you switch to starting out as a Civilian, or a low ranked soldier and work your way up. Kousenshu are the most elite of the elite, as such, their applications need to be very well organized with the proper grammar and detail. No offense, you kind of lack all of those things.

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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Apr 24, 2009 6:40 pm

Roy Dodge wrote:
Judging from this application, I seriously recommend that you switch to starting out as a Civilian, or a low ranked soldier and work your way up. Kousenshu are the most elite of the elite, as such, their applications need to be very well organized with the proper grammar and detail. No offense, you kind of lack all of those things.


how about a low ranked soldier.
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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Apr 24, 2009 6:59 pm

Sure, try for a soldier (who knows alchemy).
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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Apr 24, 2009 8:26 pm

fine a Civilian.
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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Apr 24, 2009 9:13 pm

Then edit it accordingly please.
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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Apr 24, 2009 10:19 pm

do what to it.change what?
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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Apr 24, 2009 11:51 pm

You need to edit your rank, for it's now Civilian and the rest of your app. Make it so it fits with a Civilian.
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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Sat Apr 25, 2009 12:23 am

there.
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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Sat Apr 25, 2009 1:21 am

For Nationality, put either Amestris (The state) or Ishbal.

Weapons:what ever is in his distance
I guess you can have this, but elaborate on it more.

Skills:He mostly makes lightning and using things around him to change it.
Much more detail.

Items:Gale has a Tatoo of the transmutation ciricle on his hands.6 hand guns.6 small throwing knife's.
Once again, more detail. Where the symbols are what they look like and etc.


-Also, add more to History please.
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PostSubject: Re: Gale Erra(Done)   Fri Sep 17, 2010 9:32 am

Sure, try for a soldier (who knows alchemy).

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